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To be undone.

First...I give to you
my skin.

And dissolved beneath your
fingers...I lay bare to
the flesh of my
desire.

There is my blood.

As if an ocean that ebbs dry to
the pull of constant
moons.

I bleed arid for a moment in
your gaze.

And then...there are my bones.

They know only of an ache that
reaches far from your
caress.


To be undone...like
this -

Until the ache is all that's
left.

And I vanish in your touch.



Love,
Eric
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So beautiful dear Eric. Cloud9 Cloud9

Your undone is not to be outdone.. he he..

OK OK your poem is so tender and emotive, and I'm being silly.. Googly

But I can't help but be reminded how COMPUTEREESE has added "undo" to the English language.. and we who type in little boxes Fan are "re-undoing" and "redoing" and "multiple undoing" and undone fits my nerd vocabulary just fine.. he he.. Animated1

Thank you ever so for sharing your beautiful verses with us! Typing Kiss sweety

Love n light, Teo Yum Yum InLove InLove Clap Clap

Have the heart of a gypsy, and the dedication of a soldier -Beethoven in Beethoven Lives Upstairs

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