Not sure about this one

AngelEyesMember

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Theres nothing left
Of what wasnt there
A web of lies
Fantasy fair

A dream, a hope
And nothing more
Love and lauhter
Out the door

Oh to the night
Arise my pain
I seek, I search
I pray in vain

Let darkness smother
All thats been lost
I'll pay the price
I'll bear the cost

I'll sign in blood
I'll sell my soul
Just end this now
Make death my goal

2/21/069:53 AM

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Vicky2Member

Dear AngelEyes,
This is very sad,
but deeply touching.

Thank you for sharing your words
and your thoughts with us.

Love
Vicky

2/21/061:11 PM

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GiseleMember

Dear AngelEyes,

You write very beautifully.
Your words are very sad.

There will be light after darkness.

Sincerely,
Gisele

2/21/061:17 PM

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Sue 1Member

I am very grateful and touched by your contribution to Givnology.
Thank you for sharing your deepest thoughts.
We all like you very much.

Love,
Sue

2/21/061:28 PM

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IndaMerit-Amun

Dear AngelEyes,

Thank you for sharing another one of your very sensitive poems with us. We always look forward to a new poem.

Love, Inda

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2/21/066:26 PM

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AngelEyesMember

Thank you all for your kind comments. I really wasn't sure about the quality of this poem, and debated whether or not to post it. But now I'm very glad I did!! Thanx again
Angel
xox

2/22/066:06 AM

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