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Hi everyone, I have just found and joined this site, and would love to know what the witers on here think of my latest poem. All comments and criticism welcome Bounce
Angel

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Everyday, it gets harder to carry on
Every second lasts an hour
And every hour is torture

Broken hearts can be repaired
Is there any truth in that?
What if you’re the one who’s breaking hearts?

How is it possible
To make it easier
To get out of bed each day

To be able to smile
To be able to laugh
To forget how worthless your life really is

Is there a way back?
From despair
And how do I find it

Will these dark clouds
Sit forever in my mind
Like a fog of self pity

And is it a sin
To think of giving up
And is it really worth it
Anyway?
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Originally posted by AngelEyes:
Hi everyone, I have just found and joined this site, and would love to know what the witers on here think of my latest poem. All comments and criticism welcome Bounce
Angel
AWESOME!!!

Allow me to "play with" or "collaborate" or just have FUN with your heavenly words...


Anyway


Everyday, it gets harder to carry on
Every second lasts an hour
And every hour is torture

Broken hearts can be repaired
Is there any truth in that?
What if you’re the one who’s breaking hearts?

How is it possible
To make it easier
To get out of bed each day

To be able to smile
To be able to laugh
To forget how worthless your life really is

Is there a way back?
From despair
And how do I find it

Will these dark clouds
Sit forever in my mind
Like a fog of self pity

And is it a sin
To think of giving up
And is it really worth it
Anyway?


Powerful words dear EyeAngel! Eye hear ya'! he he.. ok ok not appropriate 2 joke... Roll Eyes at least I didn't use the following image for background of your poem.. whew!



But you know, IAngel, we ALL have sadness, it is WHAT YOU DO WITH IT that is.. the thing.. .. I looked up animated angel, found the top image http://wonderflight.com/angel_justice.html and the page being about rights to copy an image, well you are Angel, don't you have the right? Anyway what I'm saying is that in our processes, doing whatever it is that we do, we can find solace and yes, as you asked, there IS truth in that Broken hearts can be repaired! You can "what if" all you like, but hey, any thing with a "..can be.." in it is possible right? Commercials can sell toxic waste and say "this.. COULD be healthy.. CAN BE the greatest medicine in the world..." and get away with it hum??? Eek

I'm sorry 1) I have taken so long to answer this great post of yours and 2) my reply is so ungodly looooooong.... dang!?!?! They are connected actually... see.....

I've been working really hard actually, to make Givnology a warm welcoming place for great words and energies like you shared here. Really! So I'm being like the awkward dance floor shiner who is saying... "May I have this dance?" nerviously... in other words...

PLEEEEEASE feel free to share your words! You can put self-help or self-work type of issues in that area/circle/forum category, health issues in that one, you get the idea... Idea

Aaaannnnndddd.. let the healing begin! Applause

Nothin' to it but to do it!

Love and light being, Teo Angel Eek Wave Cloud9 Cloud9

ps the other image that I DID use behind your words was from here: http://www.btinternet.com/~mtgradwell/ I was looking up "universe of despair" or something.. and well, your "sadness" inspired a great search for me to take on! Kiss

Have the heart of a gypsy, and the dedication of a soldier -Beethoven in Beethoven Lives Upstairs

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